| "The Arrival of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kags-sesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it even those i cried at the end. T_T
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Title: Idea's
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 17:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think sesshomaru should go cold after kagome's death choosing never to love again and then 500 yrs later suddenly catch kagome's scent and be all like * = thoughts (* sniff i know this scent can it be her? my bastard of a brother told me she was born 500 years from then can it be true this sesshomaru will find the ningen giving off the scent i must know if it's her!) hehe sorry can't resist its sorta a funny scene! any way so sesshomaru (ok i'm going to just call him fluffy for lazy reasons) follows the scent to find out it was coming off of a human pup (*hehe he doesn't know they are call babys*) and desides to observe the child ( time skip) I WILL CONTINUE AFTER YOUR OPINION ON THESE IDEA'S
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Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
let them meet again so i can cry again this was so good i want to cry again with a happy ending this time
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tHAT WAS REALLY SAD BUT BEUATIFULLY WRTEN STORY. I KNOW IT IS A ONE SHOT BUT WILL YOU HAVE THEM MEET IN THE FUTURE OR LEAVE IT LIKE THIS.?
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