| "Come For The Vampire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Exceptional
Reviewed By: Chloei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, that was excellent.. Though, I do have to agree with Nyuka about the whole 'Alice just renting out a place thing'. Seriously, she would never /NEVER/ just rent a place and call it a day. Alice loves going overboard with everything she does, even at the expense of the people who said party/event is for. Also, I do love that you did put your own creative ideas while trying to keep to the authenticness of the story at the same time, but I too think that the hotel was a bit cheesy. Even after all of that, I still loved your story. And I do hope that you will write more. I look forward to it! ^.^ Your writing skills are, as the title of my little comment describes, Exceptional!
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Reviewed By: edwardcullensgirl1997 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done- I love reading the Edward+Bella love fanfics so that was really cool. Well done and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
After reading the books I am happy to find a little spice to go with the story! I loved how you described their encounter and just wish it would have been longer! I look forward to read more from you. You obviously have a great gift and I could only hope that you will gift us soon with more of your great writing. Thank you for sharing with us!
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Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: iwantwayne15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that was so fucking hawt * drools * keep writing!
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Title: NOT a flame mearly an observation or two
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Before I say anything I want to say ....Great Job...that was a great rendishion...you have a mind many Henties would envy....lol.....ok now for some crushal note from a reader that just finished reading all the books....ok I can see you were tring to go with osentisity....I am glad but a couple of thing not major I mind you just things I picked up on....the wedding for one....Alice NEVER EVER half does ANYTHING....so I think just get that place wasn't in her style and even if she did rent that place I think she would have change it to be perfect...I just can't see her not putting her two cents into the design........ok secondly Edward doesn't have fangs.......I know I know it wierd Vampire=Fangs but thats not the case in the Twilight seiries the Vampires don't have fanges...their teeth 'LOOK' normal though the are very VERY sharp and strong the venome is in all their teeth not just the 'eye' teeth...................Ok I think thats it.....WAIT I lied....No matter how fancy the hotel it just seem kinda tack in comparison to the succluded island from the book ya know...just not Edwards style NO?!.............But ha you came up with a great short while keeping the othentity of the book and makeing it your own at the same time not a easy task all the power to you good work...................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......wow that was intense and enjoyable to read ...i deffinately encourage you to keep wrighting
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