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"A Kindling Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: rushie [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2009 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This plot of the story is a good one but i do not like the way you ended it. You could have indicated that Katara was dreaming. I like the little sense of humour in it. The description of Zuko and Katara was really good. I was hoping that you could have continued more in the sexual scenes. I love your dialogue between the characters.
 Reviewed By: Death's little Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 08, 2009 10:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good, nicely done with the realistic dream also

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