Reviewed By:rushie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 13:41 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This plot of the story is a good one but i do not like the way you ended it. You could have indicated that Katara was dreaming. I like the little sense of humour in it. The description of Zuko and Katara was really good. I was hoping that you could have continued more in the sexual scenes. I love your dialogue between the characters.
Reviewed By:Death's little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 10:51 CST Comment/Review: Very good, nicely done with the realistic dream also