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| "A Few Years Left to Live" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Aerlias
Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice update! Miroku almost fainting...made me wonder if he's diabetic, but then I don't think thats really life threatening. This is like an episode of House to me.. gotta figure out what his ailment is before you let it out!
| Reviewed By: Verdei On: July 27, 2008 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Intresting story so far... seems rather fun. I'm intrested in seeing it develop further because so far there's not much meat to it. We know Miroku is looking for someone and he may or may not be dying soon. Update soon, and good luck on augmenting yourstyle!
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