| "Frozen Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: SacredHime On: August 05, 2008 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting interesting though u aren't going to make Kagome die in the battle are you? oh no!!Keep those updates comin! I look forward to every single one since all of your stories are in mt top ten favorite.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 13:35 EDT
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update soon. i am curious about what happens when she returns to the past. i want to know how inuyasha handles two demons being interested in 'his shard detector.'
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 14:53 EDT
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update soon. i want to know what happens on her date with shuichi. it's kinda funny, youko is getting interersted in kagome in the past and so is hiei. i am curious on how everything is going to work out.
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Reviewed By: luckymiko On: August 02, 2008 09:18 EDT
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this is very interesting and i like how you have both the future and the past worlds to work with. i love your stories and maybe you could pair her with kurama this time instead of hiei. good luck with all your stories and i look forward to future chapters in all of them.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 03:25 EDT
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I REALLY like this & am hoping for more soonest. About the pairings I wouldn't mind seeing a threesome between Youko-Kurama/Kagome/Hiei, if you think you can pull it off decently, some people don't do threesomes because they don't think they can do them justice, if you think you can go for it.
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Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 01:06 EDT
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Saa! I hope it Hiei/Kagome/Youko *fangirl scream*
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Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 01:05 EDT
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Saa! I hope it Hiei/Kagome/Youko *fangirl scream*
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a fanfic genius!! You make up so many good plots. Can't wait for your next update. Bye bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 09:49 EDT
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update again soon. i love how shippo found kagome. i also think its cute that hiei is jealous of youko holding kagome. i hope you make this a hiei/kagome/kurama story. waiting for next chapters.
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 15:48 EDT
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I love how this story is starting out and can't wait to see where you're going to take it. I was going to send an email but since I'm here I just wanted to let you know that I am addicted to all of your stories. I'm in awe of how you can keep them all straight and well written. Not one of your stories falters in any way.
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very different from the others I have read. And love the plot so far. I wonder who the tear gem belongs to. B/c Hiei's is red and I don't know about other look like so. It's killing me to know this. =]] Love your story.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 06:56 EDT
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nice chapter. i loved it that shippo wanted to meet the kitsune that was following them and it was the one and only silver tongue charmer youko. update soon. i have an idea whose tear gem that is, but knowing you, you'll put some kind of mysterious twist on it. update soon.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 00:51 EDT
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Its a perfectly reasonable start, and no doubt would make a good story, except for one thing - you have 15 stories started, and aside from a couple of one shots, nothing finished that I can tell. I would suggest you take notes on plot bunnies, or write openings if you are inspired, but not put it on a listserv until you have finished some of the ones you previously started. The ability to bring a story to a climax and then closure is a necessary element of a good writer. Please don't take this too badly, but do give it some consideration.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:35 EDT
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i like this idea. what you have so far sounds interesting. update soon
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