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"Desires Left Under the Willow Tree" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2008 16:55 CDT
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Can't believe Vegeta didn't wake up when Mirai was kissing him but kinda glad he didn't as now it leaves Goku with the chance to question Mirai about it without Vegeta having a clue. Seems it got Goku's thoughts racing too so now he can explore his own feelings for the prince. Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2008 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Laughed when Vegeta opened the door to Mirai completely shamelessly sporting a hard-on. Seems he's just as uninhibited as Goku when it comes to being naked. Who wouldn't with that body! Oh that just has to be Goku at the door, please, and let him be jealous of Mirai :)
 Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 04, 2008 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww I thought it was real, poor Vegeta. Loved the humor you put into this and can't wait for you to continue.

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