"Wonderland" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: May 06, 2009 23:37 CDT Comment/Review: I love how you write Ichigo's internal dialogue. It really sounds exactly as he would tell it. Also the chemistry between them is so comfortable in this story.
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Reviewed By: AcidicLemons On: August 10, 2008 21:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked this! It was kind of different, and purely enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 00:31 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I see you are experimenting with different POV. I like the pron it was nice.
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