| "Make Do With Less" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: analove On: August 06, 2008 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love how the story is coming along! plz keep up the good work! i can't wait to read more! :]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: LOL REALLY FUNNY i think the hole abonchouse this is funny on inuyasha its boring on sesshomaru you should make sesshomaru all grouchy and bossy like inuyasha on the show now that woud be funny
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm usually not a fan of the first person point of view but this is really well written and the personalities of Yash and Kagome nicely shine through. Yash is kind of a brat though. I hope Kagome shows some of that temper soon and puts him in his place. Till your next update! ~Amber
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