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| "Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: ang3L On: January 27, 2013 11:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I'm skeptical. Man, how I hate a story when one of the character is drug addict. How stereotype. And I can totally picture Trunks as lady's man. But Goten, I like to think he dislike of casual sex (Chi-Chi drilled to his head that it's cheap and dirty), and stay unexperience... ^_^ But I fell deep and hard to your description. It's just so amazingly perfect in my prespective ^_^ I read a lot but beautiful written words keeps me coming back. Kudos for this! I love you for this! ^_^ | Title: OMG, SO HOT! >
Reviewed By: LilSakura87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 22:46 EDT
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| Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That lemon scene was to die for! I had to stop and catch my breath it was so steamy! You are an extremely talented writer, you cross the genres so easily. And you really capture the spirit of Trunks and Goten as teens. They act like typical teenaged boys while still staying in character. The story was really excellent, and I will highly recommend this to other readers.
| Reviewed By: Tenshi_of_Hikari On: August 11, 2008 16:43 EDT
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aww. I love this. =D So dark-ish yet sweet. =] Poor Trunks. Poor Goten. Yay them! I don't particularly like drug addictions, but when thrown in a wonderfully written fic, I love it. This fic is such an example. =] I found this fic on fanfiction, but came here to get the unedited version. I'm glad I did. So will there be a sequel? Or is there? I may just have to look through your profile and find out. =D
| Title: Nice start!
Reviewed By: trynia merin On: August 05, 2008 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting take! You described the two of them comparing notes on girls, and camping out very realistically. Their dialogue is great, and it's interesting to see them trying to deny the atraction, but it being there all the same. I will continue to read this with fascination. You've got a good plausible scenerio set up for them here.
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