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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 22:25 CDT
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I did not rate because I will wait for you to clean up and decide which 'person' you intend to tell the story from. I fell in love with the plot but trying to read it gets confusing and frustrating with different POV's, especially the 'you POV'. That was a new one for me. If you write from the '3rd person', it will cover everyone's thoughts and conversation just like you want. Please take this constructive criticism in the spirit it's offered.

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