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| "Arm Wrestle" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: WEWT. o:
Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hahaha. You wrote non-fluff that was moderately like fluff. Still genius. And I was listening to Gym Class Heroes while reading this. o0 The song 'Clothes Off.' Oh snap. o: Anywho, this is great. Axel/Laxeus in a non-pr0n way. This is the ultimate way to get out of having to write a crappy yaoi pairing that would make fangirls lynch you and then themselves. x.X
| Title: Hilarious!
Reviewed By: Danny865 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! Lol! Making Axel arm wrestle with Lexaeus! Axel will walk into a slaughter lol! There's also nothing wrong with the spelling and grammar, which I see with a lot of fan fics. Awesome job, great one-shot!
| Title: *pokes*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon (too lazy to log in) On: August 05, 2008 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No stops. I likes yer 1-shots. ^_^ It's nice to know that people still doing things for the 'Org. XII days of the month'. So I have been reading them since 8/2, but started with 8/1. Yes I'm bad that I haven't reviewed any of them, but what can I say other then, "I like them because they are dark and edgey, and scary, and very true to the darker side of the Organization that the fan-girls like to gloss over when they go fluffy and romantic in their presentation of the gang." I have nothing to offer you in ways of improving them, I enjoy them as they are. Dark, beautiful, deadly. The character interactions ring true, and each short gives another side of Axel to know and to fear--or love . . . or maybe to love and fear the Nothings he works with. Don't know, don't care, I just reads. . . . And I'll keep reading, even if I'm silent about my feelings. ^_^
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