| "All In a Day's Work" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can already tell this is going to be a very good story please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! It's witty and cute and is written well. Update soon?!
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Reviewed By: Verdei On: August 08, 2008 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, that was rather contrived! What a sneaky bastard. But wtf... he offers her a ride? Pretty odd! Good job on this chapter... cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Verdei On: August 08, 2008 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute so far! I think its weird that after speaking to Seshoumaru on the phone and him telling her to be in Thursday, she said she had 10 days to get ready. Typo? Anywho... poor Kagome, what a terrible first day! Weird that she would get hired as an executive straight out of college. Pretty unbelievable.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
funny and entertaining. one wonders if sesshoumaru had an inkling that kagome wasn't going to be a pushover and could most probably give as good as she got since she wasn't all that intimidated by his being company president and powerful taiyoukai. . . looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Mela On: August 06, 2008 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like I think it is a cleaver and good start I cant wait to see where you take this
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