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| "My Mysterious Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: yugigal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, what happens NEXT????? HUH? HUH? oooooooo you should do more!!!!!!!!! hehehe more about terry (HOTTIE!!!! *hearts for eyes*) | Reviewed By: Nuku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grabs the dreaded Tessen* What the heck kinda ending was that?! *muse drags her away muttering 'there's gonna be more ya idiot* Oh... never mind *sweatdrops* It's just kinda disapointing ya know? And it's definitely unexpected. | Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good crossover. I watched a couple of episodes of Batman Beyond. Teryy McGuniness is a hottie ~_~ (drools) Anyways, good storyline. I think this is the first Batman Beyond/Pokemon Crossover I've read for the first time. I just love crossovers! ^______^ Brock deserves a happy ending!! | Reviewed By: Mistress_Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes..Ter is definitely, no doubt in my mind, a hottie! That's why I wrote fics on him and I still continue to do that today! Wahaahahah! *ahem*
Well, at least I concquered in something...^-^ I made the first Batman Beyond/Pokemon Crossover without even thinking about it! Heehee! But as some of you already know, the original wasn't like this AT ALL...This fic was done over 3 years ago because I had a complete obsession over Brockie! I still do, but now that Ter has entered the picture and a few million other anime cuties like Tamahome and Inu-Yasha, it's just a teensy bit different. But I still do a lot of things w/ Brock as far as fan fics and fan art go.
Since I revamped this fic and gave it a new name, I think it did a lot better. The original version kinda sucked in my opinion, but back then I was really proud of what I did...I was stupid in short. I used really lame songs for Dawn to use, and when I looked back on all this and read it, I was like, 'Oh god...what was I thinking?'. Instead of everything going smoothly like it originally did with no REAL conflict, I had to add something to get in the way. At the time I was doing this, I was working on my Batman Beyond fic called My Will*which can be found at www.fanfiction.net^-^*. It gave me the idea to intertwine the to fics together, even tho you won't see me using a Pokemon reference in the bb fic. Reason being for this, is because the way that version ends is completely different to this fic, but the story is all the same...I mean, with Dawn having Ter's child and such...that happened (lucky girl...I think)and the child becoming evil and wanting to destroy the world happened too. But I wanted it to be different for my Pokemon fic. There were questions on this fic about Dawn's powers since no one knows how they originated and what kind of past she had, or why was everything so choppy. That, and the fact that I use her as a main character in all my fics because she is just too cool. Dawn coming from the future of the year 2030 to now is a change and no one would really expect it. I had to have that conflict between Brock and Dawn...it was just too easy to have them just get together because of some kind of fate...and dance. But they would be cute together, eh?
Brock will get a happy ending! I agree with you, Myst Lady...! The sequel to this fic will hopefully be soon back in progress through a major revamp since that one was kinda corny too. I just have to get the fic for Batman Beyond finished, since I'm working on Chapter 10 right now.
if anyone wants me to do any fan art of any part in this fic, let me know! Or if someone wants me to do fan art for their fan fics...be glad to!
..........Wow...I wrote a hell of a lot...And I was just putting down random thoughts about this fic...^_^I went fast...no wait..I always do that... NEVERMIND!^.^' |
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