| "my sister my lover?" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 22:12 CST
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update soon please
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 17:38 CST
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update soon please
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Title: TT~TT
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 20:04 CST
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its a good plot.......you should re write it after you have a lil more expierence
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 14:46 CST
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this is great update soon
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:31 CST
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yes i know my spellcheck thingy pissed me off grrr an i did have space's in it but it wouldn post like that rawr net chapter will be much better i promise Jennyoo
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 03:17 CST
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...There are alot of spelling and gramatical errors...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 14:48 CST
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this is good i like it update soon
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 18:27 CST
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this is great i can't wait to see what happens
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Title: ^_^ awsome :3
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 14:39 CST
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really lightened up my crappy day but heres a tip kay :3 update ever other or every 2 days that way u give yourself enough time to had to the quantity of your writing (which will help the quality significantly) because u dont really have much happening in these chapters as good as they may be :3 like if u took this chapter and teh chapter b4 and made them one that would go from 2 GOOD chapters to one SPECTACULAR chapter with the bounus of a awsome cliffy ^_^
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Title: ^_^ nice flash back i like inuyasha demaning tone
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 14:42 CST
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he sure knows what he wants XD lol gotta love inu and kagomes cute iditude AWSOME i luv ur fast updates :3
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Reviewed By: WhatVVB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Thanks for the fast updates! There are some spelling mistakes, but other than that little detail, nothing big. I really like the story so far. I haven't seen too many stories like this one, so I really want to know what happens! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon, im interested to see how inuyasha and kagome are gonna work, since the whole school knows they are step brother and sister. Cant wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 11:44 CST
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this is great update soon i can't wait to see what happens
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Title: luv it!
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 23:26 CST
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adn kikio is a mofo bitch who really needs a fucking pole shoved so far up her ass seh is mistaken for a gay hobo!
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Title: :3 i luved teh to new chapters and poor kagome
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 13:57 CST
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she is a really big pickle feelings for her step brother kicked off teh squad (for further notice :3) and on top of that kikyio is a royal BIRCH *growls like rabid dog* please continue i REALLY REALLY REAAAAAAAAAAAAALLY luv this story its so origonal and well written :3
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 15:32 CST
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this is great update soon
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just started reading this and if they are not related by blood then they can fall in love. Have you seen Marmalade boy or The Devil does Exist?
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Title: O.O OMG AWSOME CHAPPY (me shell6)
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 17:39 CST
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:3 i almost gave up on the story i didnt think u were going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amd OMFG HOW COULD U DO THAT TO KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and poor inu!!!! so sad yet soo funny :3
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Reviewed By: xzlyne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 11:50 CDT
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I agree with Hollywood1 your story is good but I just wish that you would spell check before updating, it isn't much of a problem but it is a little distracting. In other words your story is really good. I hope you update as soon as you can.
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Title: I love the plot
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your unique style of writing and love your story line and the plot is something different and new^^ But my only critique I have is your spelling and formatting =\ It kinda throws me off but I enjoy the story so much that I try and put it aside but it would be even better if that was corrected >.> I like the story and believe it or not Im going to favorite it, I can only hope you update soon and finish the story^.^
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Title: AWSOME NEW TITLE!!! im sure it will catch ppls attention new chapy soon please!!!!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 09:57 CDT
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another chappy!!!!!!!!!!! please
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 09:17 CDT
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there you go hope it works next chapter up soon
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Title: Awsome keep up oh and heres a tip chanhe the title its a little boring soo ppl might who actualy review probly just skip it
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 14:40 CDT
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nice work you are really oh heres a few title suggestions******************************************* i'm in love with my sister!************************ My sister is my dream girl************************* Forbinion love!************************************* YOU HAD TO MARRY HER!******************************* I dont like my sister i LOVE her (and not in a brotherly love way)********************
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Title: I am honored to be the first to post soo far i luv your story and it will go on my favorites oh any why is every one sooo short im not in the grades they are in yet and i'm like 5'11
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 19:14 CDT
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^>^ continue please
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