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| "Searching for Disaster" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Doodle Penguin On: November 23, 2008 19:51 CST
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this is great.. i love it. this is great! oh god you NEED to update. i can just imagine the next bit. "YOU HAD VOLDIMORT IN YOUR ROOM?!" so please!! please update soon.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 23:40 CDT
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Fucking hilarious. Oh, and one more thing, love the blood and bloody ashes quote, I love fans of Wheel of Time (though I dunno if he originally coined the phrase or not, it's still a cool take on british casual cursing, heh). Anyway, love the story, and seeing that this pet doesn't die in a week (aura of death anyone?) it's rather amusing. Still, I do feel rather bad about Hedwig though. Bring her back as a zombie owl maybe? Heh. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 22:52 CDT
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Well duh, it's the eye comment. Hell, everyone wants eyes that can see in the dark, that you have to get from a special doctor in a supermax prison. So hey, it's a win win scenario! Heh. Continue to update, this story is FUN! Continue to update, ja ne. Note: Still note sure about the pet, I'm thinking it's something that would feed on an aura of death, I'd think a thestral but something like a nundu might be it too. Neh. Late
| Reviewed By: kayleeeee On: August 17, 2008 13:34 CDT
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I'm enjoying this so far, but to comment on your rant in ch 4 about reporting; your experence of newspapers doesn't seem to encapsulate the British press. While the better newspapers do report events adequately well the reporting is always heavily nuanced by the official opinions of each newspaper (each one has a particular class and political affiliation). The tabloids do not hold such standards and it is often difficult to tell which bits are news and which bits are the writer's opninions. The Prophet is a very cartoonish take on the issue, but there is a large grain of truth in her presentation of it. And while there are an awful lot of lawsuits, out of court settlements and very smally printed corrections, the situation is still very much the rule, not the exception. Cynical Harry's a very fun character and I especially enjoy the fact that you've not needed to bring some crappy OFC in to highlight the poorer areas of Rowling's writing and world-building. Nice work, very entertaining.
| Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 13:07 CDT
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i wonder who harry will just tell to shove it, and by the way that he is acting i woud guess that he will be put in slythern...and i can not spell today...
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