| "7 Sins: The Gathering" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: grimbehemoth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2011 12:48 EST
Comment/Review:
wrong story +.+ disregard last comment (searches head) |
Title: sexy
Reviewed By: grimbehemoth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2011 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really sexy beginning scene, the first girl we meet sounds amazingly hot. Fox is a badass can't wait to read more |
Title: thats a good stort
Reviewed By: DarkHunterDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!! your sotry is relly cool, even thought you only have 2 characters!!!! and kikyo she looks hot...well in my head she does!!!! you should hurry up and post the next part I wanna see what the inuyasha gang looks like!!!!! especially inuyasha, miroku, and sesshomaru!!! and are kouga and ayame going to be in your story to?
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