| "Better at Being You than You" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: MotherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 07:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! LOVE IT!! |
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 15:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
this should be nominated
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 09:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
I don't go to LiveJournal, so I was unaware this was meant to be a comedy fiction. So I apologize for my earlier review. That is mind, it still wasn't particularly funny overall. Now that I know they were supposed to be that way, the Inuyasha segments were quite ridiculous and over the top, but they clashed with the Sesshomaru segments which were made to be tender and romantic. The combination and switching back and forth between the two just didn't work for me.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 23:37 EDT
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Wow, some people must not understand the words "This was written for InuComedyClubs's... Prov 5, theme Body SWAP." This story is supposed to be ooc. Sunset, this is a great story, and I enjoyed I thought it was great.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 08:14 EDT
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i liked this, vor the most part. the sess/kag was well done. i do think you went a little heavy on inuyasha, though. he's dense when it comes to other's feelings, but i never had the impression that he was mean. i did like sesshoumaru's words at the end.
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow angry much...that comment was tooootally uncalled for.....but everyone is entitled to thier opinion i guess...*glares daggers at drake clawfang*.....i thought it was amazing and i quite enjoyed this story....ive been reading your stuff since "she who the prophecy foretold" and i love what you do with the pairing....keep doing a great job....
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't Worry about those who don't like the Sess/Kag pairing because most of the time they are bias and she did not take into account what it was written for. But I did enjoy it.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha bashing, out-of-character characters, Sesshomaru idolizing...just about everything I would expect from a sub-par Sess/Kag pairing. Congratulations on not disappointing.
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