| "Love and Life of a Vampire's Fiance." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: demonic_angel_4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only problem i have is that bella is a bit out of character.... thats all
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Reviewed By: demonic_angel_4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it u should definately continue and i can't wait to find out what an elemental is ^_^
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