| "What Are You Doing?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Squeal!
Reviewed By: rixingyue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's very cute and gives me the usual warm, fuzzy, squealy type of feelings that a story of this genre would give me. Delightful indeed. I liked the chapter where Kayla was talking to her friend Melanie. Kayla's behavior is quite intriguing and unorthodox, so it was very nice to hear what she was thinking on her side of the story. For a minute there I thought she was scheming something, but it turns out she just loves to see Mia blush. Woot! Love to hear more on Kayla's thoughts. This is just a personal opinion, but I love how you you're presenting the audience with a western/ eastern couple (Caucasian and Asian). I look forward to seeing how you develop these two wonderful original characters.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: andra On: December 21, 2008 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!! this is a really good story. I like the characters. Its a believeable story! keep up the good work! great story i WANT! more!
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 15:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally! You updated!
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Reviewed By: idcanymore On: October 19, 2008 09:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story considering it's your first time writing one. Can't wait to see what happen next. Keep up the good work! Oh please update soon, whenever you have time from school. =)
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: Iceberg60 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 01:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked your story thus far! Its interesting, and the characters (to the extent that I know them) are pretty believable, though Kayla still remains a mystery to me. But that's a good thing! In a romance, you always want to keep the opposite characters feelings a mystery so we want to learn more about them as the story goes along. Anyways, I like it, and would like to see it continued! Keep it up
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez, I want moreeeeeeeeeee! MORE MORE MORE! XD Love this story!! Pure amazing-ness. . . ness. :} I shall be waiting for the bext time that you update it!! -Elaina
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