Reviewed By: Nova-thecouchpotato On: February 21, 2011 13:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of a tormented relena is well used and, I think, a necessary first step for all GW fanfic writers. Interesting, but I felt it could have been fleshed out more. The single, first person, thoughts only is a little bit of a cop-out. All-in-all not a bad fic. The emotion was well conveyed and I felt for the character. I also enjoyed the lack of sap and over-dramatization of Heero. but I get the feeling that the writer is capable of much more. |
