| "Only in Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter... I have probably heard slipknot's vermillion prt.2 before, but only the musical side.. OVER AND OVER AND OVER again during my high school years when me and my friends would hang out in the practice room during Lunch... and they didn't have any singer in their band... SO I know the music, but have no clue what the song are (other than they are all rock songs) and what the lyrics are...
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 14:18 CDT
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Hmmmmm... While MisfitBride does have a point that taking your time and not rushing out chapters makes for better writing, I can't help but want to encourage you to update quickly simply for my own selfish pleasure of getting something new and worthwhile to read. Also it helps alleviate my intense curiosity about my speculations as to why no one knows Kagome yet Inu feels he does, or why his memories are so messed up compared to what everyone else thinks happened. I've got several theories on that, maybe Kagome was/is in a coma too, and they sorta shared their lives while unconscious. Or maybe she died in that accident but was an organ donor so he literally has part of her in him. Or maybe she is someone he knows from the past but cuz his memories are fracked he doesn't remember even though Sango obviously does. See what I mean about speculation? I NEED to know, so ummm update soon, but don't force it out faster just to please your fans.
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 15:44 CDT
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Very well written so far. The chapters are a good length and the vocabulary is used correctly. When people tell you to update quickly, don't. Take your time when writing these stories. The story looks and reads a lot better. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! the first one was a little confusing but I think you purposefully did it like that and the rest of the chapters will make more sense of it.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 18:15 CDT
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another very good chapter , still very confusing though , but I will look forward to your next chapter
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Reviewed By: future author On: August 15, 2008 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting beginning. i can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:06 CDT
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its a very interesting start for a story and an awe take on how one would feel/see/hear after an accident
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:36 CDT
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impressive vocabulary, no confusion... the thrill of whatever ride he was experiencing, the impact subsequent checking of his injuries by unknown persons, the result on each sense, culminating in unconsciousness. interesting and captivating. i'm curious where you're taking this. . . you may want to check your summary as a 'fatal accident' ends in death... wouldn't it be a 'near fatal accident'? ♠ thank you, ginny
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