| "Inner Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Please!
Reviewed By: colorfullexicon On: February 28, 2011 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that it has been over a year, I know. But I also see that there is hope. Pretty please, update? I love the story, I love every part of it! |
Reviewed By: SweetheartNinja On: August 14, 2010 01:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just found this site today, and I enjoyed your writing very much. I hope you plan to finish it! Lots of depth and moves nicely.
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Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far.I really do hope you plan on finishing it.It would be a shame if you didn't.You are an excellent writer.
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Reviewed By: yezael88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH ...I really like your style of writing I can't wait to read the continue of the story....It's one of the best fanfic I've ever read...Hope you will update soon ...
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 04:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I'm so happy that you FINALLY updated!!*does a little dance* I was really starting to think that you gave up, and that would have made me sad. And I really mean that, I'm not just sayin' it.*smiles* Poor Sanzo and Gojyo!! Sanzo 'cause he's still really out of it, and doesn't seem to want to wakeup anytime soon. Even though his dreams/memories were funny to read about. He always seemed to react and say something that fit with real time, it was funny. But obviously NOT very fun for Gojyo, as it's driving him mad, trying to find an answer to Sanzo' mumbling's and NOT finding one. Well he does, but it's one that makes him think that everything that has happened to Sanzo is his fault, when it isn't...well not ALL of it is his. Poor things, Sanzo just needs to get well and wakeup so he and Gojyo can talk, that's what needs to happen.*smiles* Well I'll stop here, before I go on forever, thanks for the update, can't wait to read chappie 5!! Until then, BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 06:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only one thing to say to you about this chappie and that is....DAMN...ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!!!!!*feels chest for fast beating heart* Gods I thought I was going to die when Sanzo was hurt and then almost died himself. But I do have to say that the scene between Konzen and Kenren was something hot, so that made me forgive you.*smiles* Thank you for the chappie, it was worth the long wait.*grins*
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 09:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have never none this updated if I was not looking for new Saiyuki fic.'s to read. They are supposed to tell you by e-mail but I never got it.*cries* But enough of that, this was a relly good chap. we're kind of getting some where in Sanzo's weird actions. He's dreaming about the past when he was Konzen, and Gojyo was Kenren and the pleasure's they both shared, but then before he wakes up it changes to the present and they are themselves again. Poor Sanzo at first he couldn't remember the dreams but now that Gojyo is leaning over him like in the dream he does remember. How is he going to react now that he recalls all?!?!? Can't wait to find out, so until next time BYE!!!!*smiles*
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story I really want to know what happens. I'm a huge fan of any Sanzo+Gojyo fic's, I love reading them together hell I even wrote one and I'm in the process of writing another. You really have my intrest, so please update soon.*gives puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Epona Goddess On: August 16, 2008 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start to the story (and if you don't continue it I'll...well, there's not much I can do, but I'll be really disappointed!) I can't wait to see what happens next. You wove the tension and other parts of the story into their personalities perfectly, and it was very realistic. Keep it going!!!
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