Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very poetic and flowing style of writing, certainly. I can't stand the Sess/Kag pairing, but I respect a well-written story regardless of pairing when it's just that - well written. My main concern, pairing aside, is the plot, in that I had trouble understanding it. As I took it, Kikyo had somehow exchanged her half of their soul with Kagome's, in turn affecting their personalities...? I'm not entirely sure, you didn't make it very clear. Had Inuyasha and Kikyo's involvement in Kagome's despair been made clearer, and made sense, I'd have given higher marks for enjoyment. As is, I believe this is the best rating I've given for a Sess/Kag story. Congrats.
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