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| "Reminiscence, Prevention, and Protection" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Kepp me on my feet
Reviewed By: Koneko778 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Im totally hooked on your story, I love how you described Kikyo as the bitch she really is, and this only gets better, your story is at the top of my fave five stories, so YOU MUST KEEP GOING. ^.^
| Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story, I loved reading it. Please please continue! For your first fanfic it went pretty well, i do advise you look over some of kagome's inner dialogue though as some of it sounded a bit awkward and lacked sentence flow. Other than that great first try I loved it, as i said before please continue!
| Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a wonderful story such romance, thirller, drama. I just love high school stories, but i did think sango was a little mean to her man. Keep up on the good writing and I can't wait to continue on the sequal of this story. Until next time
| Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic i've read everthing from start to end. I do hope you make a sequal.
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