| "Kagome and The Silver Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story from beginning to end! It was dramatic and romantic! I especially loved the ending! I hope you continue to write!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was great ^___^ loved it :D
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Reviewed By: loveofcandy On: September 12, 2008 19:41 EDT
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this is interesting... its kinda a remake of one story i forget the title exacally but his name was the silver hanyou as well some of teh same dialect i dont think it will be as good as that story though if you change the wording around a bit it might of made it better this was a good story though keep writing youll get better you have the tallent
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Title: YAy MIRO HAD TWINS AND KAGOME HAD A LITLE GIRL WHAT A GREAT ENDING I WISH U WOULD DO A SEQUEL OH WELL THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 14:36 EDT
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THANK U SOO MUCH
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww loved it :P but its sad, coz you killed poor Sesshy T_T
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was like the awesomest fanfic i ever read (next to my own of course, lol) thanks for sharing! and let me know if you ever plan to make a sequel!
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 05, 2008 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole story was amazing. You did a wonderful job. I am glad that Inuyasha and Kagome had a baby boy. Again, that was a great story.
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Title: AWSOME CHAPPY OH AND U ARE SO LUCKY SCHOOL STARTED FOR ME LIKE A FUCKIN WEEK AGO xp AWSOME STORY I LOVED THE ENDING i am a little disapointed it wasn't twins though.....sniffle
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 06:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
^.^
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Title: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SAILOR U NEVER SAID DAT BOUT MY STORY WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH BOO HOOO WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.........sniffle i hope no one heard dat *cries to self*
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 17:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
sniffle
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Title: YAY AWSXOME CHAPPY ITS SOOOO COOL U BROUGHT KOUGA INTO THIS I LUV BUT Y DID U HAVE TO MAKE A CLIFFY I MEAN U STOPPED AT THE BEST PART WAAAAAAAAAAH I WANT KAGGY TO GIVE BIRTH I WANT KOUGA TO LIVE AND INU TO BEAT BUT NOT KILL THE WOLF DEMONS WAAAAAAAAA
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 17:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
NEW CHAPPY PLEASE
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap thats a nasty turn. first she gets kidnapped, now her water's broken? god i hope inuyasha gets to her soon. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SailorKagome On: September 04, 2008 15:33 EDT
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I love your story. It's simply perfect! Lol,Kagome being kidnapped by Kouga is indeed a big suprise,I never expected that. This is one of the best InuYasha fan-fics I have ever read,and believe me,I red some.Just a little question: what's with this paragraph? "-" Nu-ţi face griji, Kagome. Dacă va veni timpul să vină pe lume, vom fi pregătiţi să îl întâmpinăm cum se cuvine." Kagome zâmbi şi îi atinse uşor faţa. Mereu a dorit ca viaţa ei să fie aşa, să fie cu Inuyasha. Seara sosi fără să se întâmple ceva important. Inuyasha era la o întâlnire cu echipajul, pregătindu-se pentru următoarea călătorie de după naşterea copilului. Kagome rămase singură acasă, aşteptându-l. Avea o presimţire. Una care îi zicea că nu o să mai dureze mult. O înfricoşa puţin deoarece Inuyasha nu era cu ea, dar se linişti ştiind că el ştia când îi venea timpul. Iar el era liniştit. Momentan. Privi pe geamul camerei şi văzu cum Luna strălucea peste florile de "Aura nopţii", preferatele mamei lui Inuyasha. Îşi aduse aminte de acea noapte când Inuyasha a dus-o la mormântul mamei lui:" It's in romanian. Yaaay,I love my contry!!
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 04, 2008 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not see Kouga taking Kagome coming at all! You surprised me, but in a good kind of way. Poor Kagome, about to give birth while there is an army keeping her husband away from her. Update soon.
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Title: AWSOME CHAPPY I WISH U WOULD MAKE A SEQUEL AND DID U DESIDE WETHER OR NOT TO DO TWINS CUS IT LOOK S LIKE TWINS YAY INU AND KAGGY R MARRIED YAY *DOES DANCE*
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 18:33 EDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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