| "Consumed Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Hinata's Twin On: October 23, 2008 11:31 CDT
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This is the work of evil. How dare you give us a cliffy and then say we're gonna kill you. I should kill you now. But on a more serious note, its really good, I can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: Yay awsome Chappy please continue sorry it took so long fo rme to review school and all that u no that and i just made and ff.net acount yay!!!!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 15:16 CDT
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^.^ you cant miss my acount my id is Shell6 from mediaminer lol how abviouse can yah get any way please continue although i have to be honest that chappy was a little how do i put it....slow.... allthough i LOVED the ramblling doctor lol any way dont over use the heart attack thing ok. Its a really dramatic scene but if u over use it then it will become boring and unnoticed and what a waste that would be!!! lol please continue i hope i didnt affend u
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Title: oopsy uhm i didn't mean to post that twice lol
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 13:41 CDT
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please continue this is a really good story but dont rush ur self
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Title: *laughes evily* oh yeah wat ev its still insulting so shut up!! lol (im having soo much fun) how would U like it some said something u wrote made u seem stupid? so yeah. any way awsome chappy i think it was verry creative
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 13:39 CDT
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oh uhm one thing miroku is the correct way to spell his name. ^.^ any way i love the way u made sango and miroku meet verry tragic and romantic. And sure id love to be ur friend! u do im a little crazy sometimes right? lol just kidding im just silly!!!!!!! Oh and misfitbride I DONT REALLY RANT ON ANY AND ALL STORYS I FIND THEM ON I JUST SAID THAT TO TICK U OFF BUT I'M DONE DOING THAT FOR NOW OK. so i wont rant any more.........well i might but only if im really really really bored and i think the comment is really really really mean. STILL SAYING SOME ONES WRITING MAKES THEM SEEM STUPID IS MEAN, THERE IS A NICER WAY TO SAY STUFF LIKE THAT!!! oh and i am VERY immature so yeah what do u expect? besides the comment wasn't meant for me so i don't have to take the criticism WANRING I HAVE AN ANSWER AND RESPONS FOR EVERYTHING WHEN I WANT TO BE A BITCH. well i'm done i wont replie to your com back. one more thing i'm sure this comment to u makes me sound stupid but i dont care cus i'm not im a strait A student.
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Title: *laughes evily* oh yeah wat ev its still insulting so shut up!! lol (im having soo much fun) how would U like it some said something u wrote made u seem stupid? so yeah. any way awsome chappy i think it was verry creative
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 13:38 CDT
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oh uhm one thing miroku is the correct way to spell his name. ^.^ any way i love the way u made sango and miroku meet verry tragic and romantic. And sure id love to be ur friend! u do im a little crazy sometimes right? lol just kidding im just silly!!!!!!! Oh and misfitbride I DONT REALLY RANT ON ANY AND ALL STORYS I FIND THEM ON I JUST SAID THAT TO TICK U OFF BUT I'M DONE DOING THAT FOR NOW OK. so i wont rant any more.........well i might but only if im really really really bored and i think the comment is really really really mean. STILL SAYING SOME ONES WRITING MAKES THEM SEEM STUPID IS MEAN, THERE IS A NICER WAY TO SAY STUFF LIKE THAT!!! oh and i am VERY immature so yeah what do u expect? besides the comment wasn't meant for me so i don't have to take the criticism WANRING I HAVE AN ANSWER AND RESPONS FOR EVERYTHING WHEN I WANT TO BE A BITCH. well i'm done i wont replie to your com back. one more thing i'm sure this comment to u makes me sound stupid but i dont care cus i'm not im a strait A student.
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Title: AU vs. Canon
Reviewed By: Lacymom On: August 22, 2008 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
An Alternate Universe fic is where the same characters from the show/movie/book/manga are involved, but they are in a totally different storyline. Your fic is for example, an AU. Canon would mean it still followed the storyline where Inu ang gang are hunting shards, fighting Naraku in the feudal era.
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 18:57 CDT
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i said it made them sound stupid not that the author was stupid. Also you could get this story deleted by MediaMiner if you continue to "RANT AGENST ANY MEAN COMMENTS ON ANY AND ALL STORYS I FIND THEM ON". so all in all I'm actually not trying to be mean; if it comes off rude then you need to grow up a bit and learn to take criticism. If you get someones story deleted because you don't like what I have to say then I'm going to be pissed. That's not right and it's immature. Just because I'm straight forward gives you no right to veto everything i say.
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Title: OH and fyi the heart attack was my favorite thing it was original and shows how much stress and shock kagome was in at the time oh and i know i made ALOT of mistakes on the coment under this lol please continue this story im like addicted to it!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 16:50 CDT
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^.^ *puurs* lol im crazy lol ok so im not im just bored lol continue please WARNING I WILL RANT AGENST ANY MEAN COMMENTS ON ANY AND ALL STORYS I FIND THEM ON!!!!
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Title: MISFIT BRIDE THAT IS TOTALLY MEAN!!! sheesh im glad i dont get get criticiced for my bead grammar and spelling *glares at misfitbride* Any way awsome chappy im sooo happy u uploaded it for me!!! ^.^ hey you should read my story! tell me wut yah tink
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 16:45 CDT
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Any way i like the changing from first person to 2nd person thing it takes alot to make me like a story im a picky reader lol any way i think it make it uneak (sp?) oh and MISFITBRIDE WHO SAID FIFTH GRADE VOCABULARY WAS SIMPLE!!!! sticks out tounge MY BRO IS IN FIFTH GRADE AND ILL HAVE YOU KNOW MY 5TH GRADE VOCABULARY WAS NOT SIMPLE BY ANY MEANS (it was to me but on a scale from one to ten it got an 8 soo yeah) SO BLAAH lol that was really fun!!!!! *laughes* I HATE MEAN CRITICISM I MEAN SHEESH STOP COMPLAINING IT WOULD BE OK IF YOU DID IT IN LIKE TIPS BUT CALLING SOME ONE STUPID!!!! THIS STORY HAS A VERRY GOOD PLOT...on top of that my typing skills aren't soo hot so i know how it works when your typing its very easy to make mistakes so yeah and reading things over is NEVER fun!!! Oh please continue the story i luv it and if YOU like it you should continue it no matter what some one says i got 3 reviews saying to continue a story i didn't want to write and i didn't continue now because i did what i wanted i have a great FINISHED story that turned out to be my best story yet!!
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 15:38 CDT
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Also... a heart attack????? ok...
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 15:36 CDT
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So much wrong with this fic. You made up multiple words such as "un-ability" and "un-normal". inability and abnormal; simple fifth grade vocabulary. You switch from 1st person to 2nd person views without blinking... very confusing and makes you sound stupid. Stop using dashes in every word you are unsure of. Force-full-y?! wtf is that? forcefully... wow. don't use double negatives. And get a beta for ALL of your stories if this is how they look. ^_^
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Title: awsome love it continue
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 17:19 CDT
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please continue
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