| "If You Are Not The One" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M SORRY DID I MISS SOMETHING???? HOW DID KAGOME GET TO CLUB TOXIC WITH BANKOTSU???? HOW DID YASHA AN SOUTA GET THERE TOGETHER???? AND WHY IS KAGOME DRAGGING BANKOTSU TO A VIP ROOM TO GET LUCKY???? I FEEL LIKE I MISSED A CHAPTER OR SOMPHING DID THEY HAVE ANOTHER FIGHT????WHAT GIVES???? I AM A REALLY CONFUSED DOLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS "HELP PLEASE"
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo that was hot.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 08:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
AH! And it just gets better and better. I liked Sesshourmaru's charcter in the story. XD AH!! Update soon!
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Title: Kick`Ass story
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo oh my god that was fucking off da chain.....What the fuck is kagome pregnant with Inuyasha's baby. And what about souta. i hope kouga doesn't come back, and please let kagome speal the beans to inuyasha about her real identity. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: kirarakat55 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story! So far I have loved every minute of it. I can feel the love/hate thing you have going on with Kagome and Inuyasha, it makes them so real. I love the drama and the chemistry between them all. I hope now that Souta threw himself into the mix he can con Kagome into coming clean with her identity, before Bankotsu does it for her. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lian55 On: August 30, 2008 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is pretty interesting but there's a thing that's not credible and I found it completely unnecessary. Kagome changing her name. You do realise she would need some sort of identification to actually get a job? And that ID would have her real name on it. And she isn't a convict on the run or anything. Why would she need to change her name?
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO. I have to say I did enjoy reading your story. It was pretty good. It's very creative. Some spelling errors but other than that, nothing too big. Update soon! I can't wait to read more. Don't make me wait too long. XDD
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: fasttimeport [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. Hope you updated very soon.
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