| "If You Are Not The One" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFortune On: October 09, 2008 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, please, please, please update soon!
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Title: YO!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFortune On: September 28, 2008 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! i wanna find out wat happens next!
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Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOONO SHE'S GOING TO RUN AND LEAVE YASHA THERE TO DIE !!!! WAY TO GO KAGOME CLEAN OUT HIS BANK ACCOUNT AND RUN!!!! LIKE THAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN LOL... ALREADY FIGURED OUT SHE WAS PREGNANT ,,,, THE QUESTION NOW IS WHO WILL SHE TELL ABOUT EVERY THING!!!! YASHA ,,,,SHESS OR SANGO AND MIROKU OR MAYBE SOUTA.... SUCH AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER I'M BARELY HANGING ON BY MY FINGERTIPS SO UNLESS YOU WANT TO SEE MY BROKEN AND BLOODY BODY AT THE BOTTOM OF YOUR CLIFF YOU NETTER UPDATE SOON!!!! WILL I SURVIVE???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM DOLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG that was so good...i was wondering if she was pregnant for a while but YAY...awesome...i cant wait for the next update so i hope u update soon...and congrats on the two new arrivals in your family...cant wait to hear more about them (and for an update XD)
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Title: Yo!!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFOrtune On: September 21, 2008 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG that was so intense...I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter now....so please update soon...cause its that good XD
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Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAS KAGOME FINALLY FIGURED OUT HER HEART???? DOES BANKOTSU THINK HE CAN USE HER FOR WHAT EVER HE WANTS BECAUSE SHE'S USING A FAKE ID AND THINKS SHE'S A GOLDDIGER ???? DO I SMELL WOLFSHIT TRYING TO GET HER ATTENTION???? THAT MIGHT PUSH HER TO FAR!!!! WILL SHE STOP NARAKU, BANKOTSU AND YURAS PLANS!!!!HOW???? MAYBE SHE SHOULD GO TO SHESS TELL HIM EVERY THING AND LEAVE THINKING THAT WOULD BE BEST FOR YASHA SO SHE WOULDN'T HURT HIM ANY MORE THAN SHE THINKS HER LIE WOULD!!!!hint;} WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM DOLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 14:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate cliffhangers please update soon!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh... and so it begins. What a horrid man... I hope that Kagome is able to find a way out of this. I have a feeling the climax might occur at the ball...? Hmph. It's just so aggravating... they are almost together! AH! Also.. I wonder how Miroku and Sango are doing on their romantic rendezvous. Hah. I can't wait to read more! Excellent Job!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww man i'm pulling my hair out here. this is so suspenseful.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a really good story! it has all the elements to make it a great story, the only problem is that you need to watch the malapropisms (words that sound similar but are not the ones you want, examples: 'fallow' is what farmers do with their fields, you mean 'follow'. 'stresses' is what gives people heart attacks, you mean 'tresses'. a 'lab' is where a scientist works, you mean 'lap'. etc.) spell check doesn't catch them as they are real words, just the wrong words. i suggest to the authors i beta for to download a dictionary. i use a free one i got from~ wordweb . info ~and all i have to do is highlight a word and click the icon on the toolbar. ♦ when you're reading a really good story only to come to a sudden jarring stop at a misused word. i would suggest getting a beta reader (i would offer but i don't do lemons), there are a few fan fiction sites that have a list of beta readers and livejournal has a couple beta reading communities. ♥ like i said, your story is really good but it has the potential to be great! ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: September 07, 2008 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm LOVING this story!!! What I really appreciate from this story is that you didn't rush the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome which made it believable for me and you can see the slow progression between the two. Plz keep writing and I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter =)
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! I am wondering how Inuyasha will act when he finds out her true identity... I hope you update soon :o)
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa is kagome pregnant? that was messed up for souta to be willing to give out his sister's number to the dude who broke her heart. can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Katya Izmir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story ROCKS!!! I really love it, it's been awhile since I've read a really good inu/kag fic... for some reason ppl keep putting sess and kag together O.o Keep up the good work Can't wait for the next instalment! ~Katya
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