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Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 15:58 CDT
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Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10

Comment/Review:
Well... The chapters are wayyy too short... Try to do AT LEAST 10 pages per chapter... And you made some errors in your grammar... But if you correct yourself and make longer chapters, your fic will be great ! ;)

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