| "The Real Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Lee_Chan On: May 12, 2002 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT!! LOL!! IT IS SO CUTE I WONDER HOW VEGGIE WILL LIKE THE BIRTH? HMMM HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE |
Reviewed By: Audj On: January 26, 2002 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was one of the best fics i have read! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 10, 2002 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop there you have to go on it was so good (a fan) |
Reviewed By: Jess T. On: December 28, 2001 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the similarities between the characters in the story and the characters in the show. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! It makes it easier to visualize what the charachters' speech and also their actions. The base of the story is GREAT!!! The charachters are nicely blended in with the lines of the story. You have real talent. KEEP WRITING!!!
Now one of your largest readers,
Jess T. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2001 04:43 CST
Comment/Review:
wowza! i dont know why, but i started laughing so hard during this particular chapter! you should add comedy to your genres! :) haha eewww garlic pickles :) so appropriate though! all preggies like strange stuff like *shudder* kimchi and pistachio ice cream! please write more! :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 23, 2001 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Great chapter. Can't wait to see how Veggie handles the birth itself. That'll be worth waiting for. Merry Christmas |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
that was damn cute :) i wanna see more! :) |
Reviewed By: Sue On: November 23, 2001 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a blast reading all the chapters. It was well written and you put a new spin on B/V's get together. Can't wait to read the rest of the story. |
Reviewed By: Janelle Grant On: November 22, 2001 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved it.It was really fun to read. I hope you get around to finishing it soon! |
