| "In a World Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work. Update soon please. Love the story!
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Title: Crimnal!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I have been waiting for an update forever and wondered, "Why haven't they updated?" til' I saw the amount of reviews! Criminal, criminal I tell you!!! You did an amazing job with this story, please continue! It's so like Edward in Midnight Sun. I've seen a lot of fan fictions trying to get his personality, and you hit the nail on the hammer! Amazing job! I'll update as much as I can, k?
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 26, 2009 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. It was awsome. You would have made Stephanie very happy. Keep Writing!!!!
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Title: happiness
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! YOU MUST!!!!! FOR OUR VERY SANITY YOU MUST!!!! I love how you've done your story! Keep going!!!! I'm so very happy with it.
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Ice Kikyou On: January 20, 2009 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. I love your fic, and I'm not really good with english (My native language is spanish, I could help you with that, if you want to correct it) so I'm sorry for my mistakes ^^U. I wish you would continue it... This is my favourite part, from my favourite book. And Edward's POV is so... Romantic, cute, real... I don't know... It's just like Midnight Sun... You could also make a Twilight fic with Edward's POV, because you're really good at it. Bye bye! And thanks for writing it x3 x.yuki_no_hana.x@hotmail.com (If you want to correct those spanish parts...)
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Reviewed By: the pam On: January 10, 2009 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great writing. This is as good as Stephenie Meyer's writing(no affence to other writers). This is like every thing that Edward would say when he found out that Bella died. I nearly cried. I can't wait any longer for you to write the next chapter. Even though i now what happens i want to read it badly. Update A.S.A.P. Thank you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Selexia-Lily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness... this was so good! You really convinced me that it was Edward talking... I'm seriously on the verge of tears right now. Amazing job! The writing style, the description, the overall Edward-ness! ;) And this is after only the first chapter! I can't wait to continue reading! Yet again, AMAZING job! ^-^ If you can give me any pointers on getting the "Edward-ness" down so well, I would really appreciate it! SPECTACULAR! XD
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Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 14, 2008 01:41 CST
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I really, really like this fic. I know it's been a while since you updated it but I hope you are going to continue it. Please?? I would really love to see more of it. It's good. I hope it will be soon. Thank you.
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