| "Passport to Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting concept. A pretty original take will make for a very creative story. There somethings here and there that could be fixed but I won't bitch about them because they don't really take from the enjoyment of the story. I like the first person approach. All in all: If you write it, I shall read. Nikki
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 07:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I love your story.. It has great detail and the plot is Nothing I have read before. I love the beginning..very humorous!! Please Write More.. I can't wait to read more chapters. Please..Pretty Please Update soon:D:D And keep up the great work:D
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