| "Sunsets Over Mulberry Fields" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: WHY!
Reviewed By: Syn'ri On: September 14, 2008 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My enjoyment factor is so low because of Kazuma's death. I never really read stories with Kazuma being too prominent, but it just feels incomplete without him there to fill the dobe role. It just doesn't feel right, so I hope you find a way to complete the story and add the missing piece. I will be reading.
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Reviewed By: songbird_1025 On: September 14, 2008 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This has got to be one of the most emotional fics I have ever read. I cried when I read the second chapter and then when I went to the third chapter I cried some more. But I like where you are going so far. I think this is one of those stories that I would not be able to get enough of. Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SFP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 01:55 CDT
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Wow! Really glad I found your story. It is exceptionally different from the average Kazuma / Kagome family stories out there. You have added a glorious depth to a much-overused story line that makes it remarkably fresh and new. Bravo! Bravo!! Encore!!! I will be patiently waiting for more of this wonderful story. (Wish me luck on the patients' part please!) ~SFP~
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy Crap. I'm still crying. That was so sad! This was wonderfully written and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 16:13 CDT
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this is so sad i cant wait till kagome and the guys get the guy who killed kazuma. although i should probably read past vol 5 if i want to know more of what's going on...or just check wiki.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 14:36 CDT
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only kagome would have accepted the way kazuma died. i thought it was great that she said he died the way he thought he would. yusuke comforting her. hmmm? i wonder if kazuma would aapprove of yusuke takiing care of his cousin. i think he would. update soon
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 12:40 CDT
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yet another amazing chapter... you made me cry and you aren't alone in having been to too many wakes, in fact i should have been to more but i wasn't informed until after that i had lost my friend. life's a bitch.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 03:24 CDT
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Wow so emotional. You've made me feel sad along with the characters. Great work! Update quickly. (Please, lol)
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god... update soon please. this story is amazing and well written, i can't wait to see what happens next.and poor kagome will be devastated...
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Reviewed By: DYquem nsi On: September 07, 2008 23:51 CDT
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With all the limited choices on how to connect Kagome with the YYH gang, this is one I can't recall ever seeing before. You have put a new and imaginative twist on the entire 'Kagome as relative' concept. Good job (very brave) to kill off Kuwabara in the very first chapter and then use that as the basis of the others meeting Kagome. Very strong opening. I presume Kagome will figure out quite quickly he was killed by a youkai. I wonder if she will blame the three. Perhaps Koenma will let them talk to Kuwabara's spirit so Yusuke can stop beating himself up over his last words to him.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 23:31 CDT
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poor kazuma. no one deserves to die like that. i am dreading kagome's reaction to her cousin being gone. update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:34 CDT
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interesting start. update soon. i am curious how this story will go.
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Reviewed By: misfits284 On: September 04, 2008 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far and can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update soon
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow. What an interesting beginning! I can't wait for more. Good work.
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