| "Sunsets Over Mulberry Fields" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 00:17 CDT
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well at least to make up for the interruption between yus and kag is they found the arsehole and kurama and hiei get to have plenty of fun! Yay for fun!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (not logged) On: September 29, 2008 15:28 CDT
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Beautiful story, wonderful chapter. Amazing how our emotions can control so much of our actions. I look forward to the growth of their relationship
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 12:51 CDT
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ok so i read these this morning and i've gotta say i liked the ending. i especialy loved how sadistic the boys were in revenge. if i had had a chance after my friend was shot i would have been just as bad. but they were arrested and are serving time. see, your story was realistic. well done.
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Reviewed By: songbird_1025 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very well written story. After I got over crying like a baby, it just had a great flow. I'm not really into Yusuke and Kagome pairings but that one was great. I just can't believe that it is over. Hope you have a new one in the works, I can't wait for another story from you.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 04:49 CDT
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this story was over so quickly, for some reason i expected yusuke and the others to have to hunt through the makai for the killer and to take kagome with them.
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Title: Sunsets Over Mulberry Fields
Reviewed By: Hiei08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done death fic!!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 20:44 CDT
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awww those two need some serious consolation. I feel horrible for them. Another great chapter from you. Thanks~
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Reviewed By: DYquem nsi On: September 28, 2008 20:28 CDT
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Glad you didn't wait too long before putting up this chapter. At first the sex seemed to jar, but then I realized it really didn't. It actually made perfectfully good sense. Not rational on their part, but it not totally unrealistic. People do things like that when they are in immense pain.
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Title: Sunsets Over Mulberry Fields
Reviewed By: Hiei08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, all through the first chapter you really had me believing that it was Hiei doing this.. Now I'm confused as to who killed Kuwabara. Excellent suspense job for me. Please update quickly. :o)
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 03:41 CDT
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talk about ruining a mood. yusuke's communicator ringing. talk about bad time. oh well yusuke can take all of his anger out on the demon that killed kazuma. update again soon. i want to know what happens when kagome and yusuke meet up again.
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Title: WHY!
Reviewed By: Syn'ri On: September 14, 2008 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My enjoyment factor is so low because of Kazuma's death. I never really read stories with Kazuma being too prominent, but it just feels incomplete without him there to fill the dobe role. It just doesn't feel right, so I hope you find a way to complete the story and add the missing piece. I will be reading.
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Reviewed By: songbird_1025 On: September 14, 2008 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This has got to be one of the most emotional fics I have ever read. I cried when I read the second chapter and then when I went to the third chapter I cried some more. But I like where you are going so far. I think this is one of those stories that I would not be able to get enough of. Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SFP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 01:55 CDT
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Wow! Really glad I found your story. It is exceptionally different from the average Kazuma / Kagome family stories out there. You have added a glorious depth to a much-overused story line that makes it remarkably fresh and new. Bravo! Bravo!! Encore!!! I will be patiently waiting for more of this wonderful story. (Wish me luck on the patients' part please!) ~SFP~
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 19:00 CDT
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Holy Crap. I'm still crying. That was so sad! This was wonderfully written and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 16:13 CDT
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this is so sad i cant wait till kagome and the guys get the guy who killed kazuma. although i should probably read past vol 5 if i want to know more of what's going on...or just check wiki.
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