| "Broken Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Ohmigod On: October 17, 2010 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story. Got me hooked right from the beginning. Your grammar is awesome, but spelling sometimes fails, but it's really rare and you are still able to understand what you have meant with the word. I like your writing style. And don't worry, I'm even worse than you in writing fight scenes. Actually it was pretty well written so no stress about that. So yeah, loving it, you've got me hooked, please update soon, and if you can't do that then update it when you feel like updating, just don't abandon this story.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 23:13 CDT
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YAYYYYYYY THanks for the update...wonderful chapter and it was a great review to hear whats happened in everyone elses life...but I silently wanted to hear about Sasuke??? OOOOO Update soon so goooooood
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 01:09 CDT
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WOW That is some intense, angsty stuff there You REALLYYYYYYY need to update soon cus I cant wait to see what happens. Story is very original and love your writing style so keep it up
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Reviewed By: Canadian Ginger On: May 13, 2010 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say I really love this fic. I normally don't leave reviews on mediaminer (shame on me, I know) but I felt I had to leave one here and tell you to keep on writing! This is a whole new spin on NaruSasu and I can't wait to read more of it. Yes, I thought Naruto would leave. No, I didn't think he'd only take one of his children. So I guess I'm in between on that vote ;) Oh, and please kill Sasuke off and have Naruto get with Gaara! Hehe, come on, that idea has some appeal to it!
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Reviewed By: Kimen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*raises hand* I want to kill that evil butt. I still like the story.
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Reviewed By: Kimen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it should be someone they know instead of a complete stranger.The plot and story is interesting in itself.
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Reviewed By: xXTigraXx On: May 22, 2009 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more! I've become addicted! I swear to god I will hunt you down and kill you in your sleep if you don't continue it!
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Reviewed By: reicheru_x [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 16:17 CDT
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This was a really captivating first chapter. You seem to have a very interesting storyline going and I would love to know what happens next. Update soon please I can't wait to read the next part.
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Reviewed By: bloodsapphire On: September 08, 2008 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic. i can't wait to see what is going to happen next and how this will play out. it is definitely an interesting concept. good luck.
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Reviewed By: SasuXHina4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
More Dammit!! I want more!!
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: September 06, 2008 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job on the first chapter~ I wanna see wat happens next please~!! ^.^
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