| "Memento Mori" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: IC On: September 15, 2008 18:48 EDT
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That was awsome. I really liked the plot and the tenderness. You should totally do a part 2.
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Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: September 15, 2008 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have GOT(!!!) to make this into a full blown story. I'm on my knees and begging here! This is FANTASTIC!!! What a story this could be! Don't just leave it here. Get rid of Hojo and bring these two star-crossed lovers together. PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i would have dumped hojo... lol... love the story!!!
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Reviewed By: twistedways On: September 09, 2008 11:31 EDT
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.........but I want more!!!! The silver and gold reminder hmmmm, I think I know what that is. So are you going to continue this? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was the first high school fanfic I like..god I hope you make more or continue this one
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 12:02 EDT
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oh gods the end is just so sad yet happy at the same time. *sniff sniff* well good luck in the contest and i do hope you'll make a sequal for this. maybe years later, wat'll happen wif kag and inu? yea, that parting was a bittersweet one...:( Kimiko =
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it!!!! It would be really awesome, if you continued it!! Its a great story of passion and want!!! Great work:D:D Please keep going with it!!!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the drabble you posted and I love the fleshed out story even more. So where are you going with this story? I wondered at the end of the drabble it said Inuyasha left her a memento of silver and gold and I wondered what it was. Now that I read this full fledged version, if I had to hazard a guess, is it the shikon jewel key chain? I was thinking something completely different before reading this. The only reason why you got an eight out of ten for originality/creativity is because I've read Kagome and Inuyasha in High School stories before so I can't give you a ten there. I can say is that your's blows all the others out of the water. Well you left me and I'm sure many other people hanging so please write another chapter, if you would be so kind. Your anxious fan who is waiting for more, Zach
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(at school or hell.. which ever you want to call it)) On: September 07, 2008 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so have to continue this... Good luck on maitain this story to such a high quality... lol Kagome has the good life, but has never had any pasion..doesn't that make her a little dull???
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:12 EDT
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Amazing, very well written. Such a shame she didn't give Houjou the ring back. *sigh* So sad. =(
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Reviewed By: Perseverance On: September 07, 2008 19:27 EDT
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This drabble is amazing. You had me enthralled in it from the very beginning. And I do believe that somehow, Kagome will meet Innuyasha again. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: dragoonqueen On: September 07, 2008 17:40 EDT
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I hope you won the contest. Is there any possibility of you expanding this into a story? It would be a crime to leave it as it is.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 07, 2008 17:15 EDT
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Okay I read the second chapter of the collection, as well as this and WOW!!!!! That was so good. I imagine this is a one-shot but it would have made an incredible story.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...this was amazing! Whether you decide to leave it as it is or continue it I will be placing this on my favorites and stalking it :D I loved the story! Kagome's emotions were so real and the lemon was tastefully done. Sad ending but it makes the story seem sort of...poetic. Very nice. Hope to read more of your work! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 15:31 EDT
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You have GOT to be kidding if you think this fabulously addicting tale can end here! I will hound you to the ends of the earth...I will offer to beta for you...I will beg on my knees...but please, more!
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