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| "Memento Mori" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: kirr1001 On: March 08, 2012 11:08 EST
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I just fell in love with this. It's sweet and not any overly romantic or overly erotic. Great job! | Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: March 07, 2011 01:16 EST
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This is a wonderful well written romance, I found myself swept into the characters story. | Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 19, 2010 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First thing that came to my mind as I was reading: Wow, this is wonderfully written. I found myself pausing and rolling some sentences over and over in my head. I like Inuyasha here, for once not being so gruff and aloof, but still in awe of her. I would normally consider this OOC, but it works so well in this universe, and after fics of continuous "wench" and "bitch" remarks, it's pretty damn refreshing! I like Kagome here too; she's not (too) busy self-pitying or crying, and you got her character just right: she is all of those wonderful things and yet she doesn't realize it, and she's one HECK of a people-pleaser! So it's good she decided to follow her own happiness with Inuyasha. And the lemon at the end? Goodness, it was finely crafted. From the lamplight to the "crimson and lace,"--and kudos to safe sex! And the smattering of Dave Matthews Band lyrics pulls it all together so very nicely. LOVED this story.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: mylovemiroku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story! I was skeptical at first, seemed like the typical high school drama of the "Perfect Girl". I think you set that up pretty well, but there was just that hint of something extra that made me keep reading. The focus on PASSION and the intense feelings for both of them just felt so real. I am glad that they paralleled the original Shikon no Tama story of the Feudal era, without all the extra Kikyo drama. I would really like to see you expand more on their college life and how her family deals with her relationship with Inuyasha. I also wonder why you named it Memento Mori? Seems a bit morbid, but I am interested in hearing your take on it.
| Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful piece! The idea caught my interest since the very beginning and I'm just a sucker for AU. Your writing is pleasant to read, so I definitely enjoyed the time I spent on (reading) Memento Mori :D.
| Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 05:17 EST
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Okay, this is just precious. I actually really liked the fact that Kagome didn't hook up with Inuyasha right after officially breaking up with Hojo. This seems a story about finding herself, about discovering who she is and what she wants, listening to herself and her own heart, and not about defining herself by whatever guy she's with and the world he involves himself in. So I appreciated that despite the fact that it left her in pain. (self-discovery usually is unfortunately) Still, having them both still care about each other during that absence also speaks to their having actual feelings instead of just lust or chemistry or whatever. Nice story/setting, well paced and not rushing their relationship, and I truly enjoyed it.
| Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was such a good story! It was short but sweet. Nice job!
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 02:37 EST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction Dec08/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: Biomedchick On: January 04, 2009 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I can come up with. I am floored. That was amazing! You are an extremely talented writer. I have read quite a bit of Inuyasha fanfic, and this is probably the best one I have ever read. I don't usually like the stories of these two together in modern times, prefering the ones based in the feudal era. But quite frankly, from the moment I started reading this, I was hooked. I read through all four parts. It drew me in, I felt like I was there. It was so descriptive, I could actually feel what Kagome was feeling. It's very rare to find a fanfic with this kind of depth. Thank you so much for sharing this with the world!
| Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word for this one: WOW. Seriously, this was awesome! Best short story I've read in ages. Great job!!
| Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really great. The lemon was done tastefully and really showed how much they loved each other and not just gratitous sex! Awesome job and thanks for the X-mas cheer!
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 14:43 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 04:21 EST
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finally! i've waited for this for soooo long! i'm happy it all turned out perfectly!
| Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 01:45 EST
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thank goodness! they finally ended up together. all the angst was killing me ^_^
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 20:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take it back...the length, the story, the ending is perfect. Short and sweet and a fun, cute read while it lasted :) I definetely hope to read more of your work! ~Amber
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