| "What's Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: September 07, 2009 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story update soon
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
i hope u update soon...i cant wait to see how things will turn out now that kagome is back
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! But bringing kikyo into the picture....man if he's sleeping with that THING...and I was in kagome shoes, I wouldn't let him near me much less touch me..god knows sht STD's kikyo gave him. Have inuyasha catch her getting it on with naraku or something. Lol! Where kikyo is naraku will fallow. My donkey theory on fanfiction (where the head goes the ass fallows.) Hmmm..maybe kikyo should be the ass...o_0
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Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE UPDATE ,,,, HELPED SETUP THE STORY NICELY.... IT SHOULD BEGIN TO GET MORE INTERESTING HEN THEY FINALLY MEET AGAIN BECAUSE I THINK THE FUR IS GOING TO FLY AND MOSTLY DOG FUR!!!!LOLLOL HOPE SO DOG BOY HE DESERVES IT JUST STOPPING TALKING TO HER LIKE THAT WITH NO EXPLANATION OR REASON!!!! THAT IS JUST A GUY THING,,,,YOU DON'T WANT TO LOOK WIMPY OR EMOTIONAL SO YOU LIE TO YOURSELF AN SAY I DON'T CARE AND WALK AWAY AND HIDE FROM THE PAIN!!!! OOPS I'M GIVING AWAY GUY SECRETS,,,, DISREGARD EVERY THING I JUST SAID!!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 17:04 CDT
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oh yes comence dog *cough* ass whipping. wonder if kags gets to shock him with holy power? no? yes? *puppy eyes* peas!!!
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter...sooooooooooo question...can I hurt InuYasha????? Cause if I was Sango, Inu would be soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo close to death, he would wish was on good terms with me. And why did you HAVE to bring in Kikyo??? Since you don't like her!!! *sighs* But anyways....again nice chapter but only have I beat some since back into Inu! xD
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Title: THE CHOICE IS YOURS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FROM DEEP BELOW THIS SOUNDS LIKE A REALLY GREAT STORY SO FAR!!!! WE WERE JUST LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO READ WHILE KEEPING THE FIRES HOT AND FOUND THIS STORY AND AFTER READING FIRST CHAPTER WE HAVE DEEMED IT GOOD ENOUGH TO ALLOW YOU TO BE ADDED TO THE FAVORITES LIST OF THE LORDS OF THE UNDER WORLD!!!! DO NOT TAKE THIS HONOR LIGHTLY.... FOR I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks They will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an Update is posted!!!! After which they will transform Back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are And want to play with you for a couple of hours Before coming home!!!! .... SO DON;'t MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG FOR AN UPDATE !!! STORY IS REALLY GOOD LOVE THE INTERACTION SO FAR!!!! I thought I would just Let you know how good you are doing!!!! ONLY ONE SMALL FLAME,,, WHERE'S CHAPTER 2 ???? IF YOU KNOW WHAT'S GOOD FOR YOURSELF AND YOUR READERS YOU WILL UPDATE!!!!`THIS OLDDOG333 HAS SPOKEN,,,,, We will just have to wait and see if our trust in your abilities will be justified... BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" II just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on you have to write more i want to know what happens next. great so far
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* great begining *sniff*
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...I'm the first one to write a review for you. But anyways...wow...and that author note at the end. I'm not a Kikyo fan in the series she should of stay dead. So that my opinion. But anyways...I know how InuYasha and Kagome are feeling. So on, the chapter was great and I can't wait for your next update!!!!!
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