| "A Grudging Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 21:26 CST
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The Tendo Dojo super-secret poison kiss move?!! Oh my goodness! That was hilarious! Great stuff! I have more to say, but I won't say them now, because I'm going to read chapter 23... finally!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 19:20 CST
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Oh my God! Chapter 19 was so good... so hot! He finds himself getting deeper into this mess he created whenever he tries to get out of it. One thing I noticed... each new chapter seems to be better than the previous one -I mean not only in terms of the plot, but also in terms of writing style and grammar. Considering that I thought it was well-written when I started reading it, it is safe to say that I'm a veeery pleased reader right now. I wonder how she's going to learn the truth. Why do I have a feeling that she won't hear it from his lips as a confession directed to her? Ha! Very good stuff, I can't stop reading... So, if you'll excuse me, I still have a few more chapters to read.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 19:41 CST
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End of Chapter 15, and I finally decided to take a break! I guess I don't need to say that I'm hooked. I can't help it, the story is well written, and I have a thing for stories in which Inuyasha has an alter ego. I must say that I especially like the emphasis you put on his sense of smell, and everything that comes with it. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters, but I honestly need a break. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 09:30 CST
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Hey, I just read chapter 1. USC and UCLA, hmm? Haha! That was hilarious. This story has been taking my attention lately, but I just found the time to start reading it. I can't wait to see how you continued with the plot, so I'll just read the rest.
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to be true and say i dont think i can wait long for the next update but for you i will. the chapter was the best so update soon okay
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a romantic chapter and every thing comes out! I love it x10! I can't wait to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be looking forward to your update! I can't say it enough: definitely worth the wait! I LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 15:53 CST
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yay! I LOVE FLUFF!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And there it is, the big lemon! Very nice job, I must say. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm sure Kagome has some more issues to workut with InuYasha. Do you think you'll be writing another fic after this, or is it one of those one-time things? I hope it's the former.
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Title: YAYYY!!!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!! I can't believe it! This is what i waited for! I still continue to grovel at your feet, thanking you for this wonderful story! Figuratively speaking of course I can't wait for the next chapter, especially with the lemon! You rock man! Keep this up until the end, I will continue to read your stories but i will ever love this one I know I'm sounding sappy and stupid and I'm an adult, but when it comes to a good Inu/Kag story such as this, I can't help myself!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap, I should have put the little dance I did after this chapter on youtube. Seriously, just thinking about two sports opponents who're suppose to be fighting eachother basically drop their weapons and start making out makes it hard to breathe for me. I absoluetely loved it! Also, thanks for replying to review, I got you email just this morning, and I was looking forward to reading this all day! Can't wait for the next chapter, big lemon!
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Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...this chapter was Kaiwii
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 14:36 CST
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yay! I would have been gripping the edge of my chair if it had handles update soon
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Title: AIEE!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...that was intense! I was quivering the whole time! What exactly is going to happen between them now? AIEEEE! Continue and i will be ever grateful yes I'm sounding like a dork but hey it's a good story! Can u blame me?
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 10:12 CST
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that last chapter made me cry (for some reason heh heh) please update I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 00:15 CST
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wow, I love this chapter, it was so angst, especially the last part, I just want to know what' happens in the game, good job, keep going!!
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