| "A Grudging Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, man you had me on the edge of my seat on this one!!! When Sango was telling her to shoot him, I was all 'no, no! don't be like Kikyou!' I was actualy pretty happy when she walked away. And the date-rape accusation was totally unexpected, and I thought that would have bothered him more while he was drowning his sorrows in alchohol than it did. Excellent chapter, and I am just beyond pleased that you posted early. ALSO! thanks for recommending Blue Guitar. I normally stick with mm.org, but that story has quickly moved to the top of my must-see list, right along with this story and a couple others. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next post!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 20:42 CST
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omg this was a darkie, but a goodie. thnkx and please update soon! I'm not sure i can wait that long! :b
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Reviewed By: Yurara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 22:22 CST
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OMG THAT WAS OMG(BTW IM DIAMOND369 ON FANFICTION I WAS JUST CHECKING OUT THE STORIES ON HERE FOR SOME ODD REASON THEY WONT SEND ME UPDATES ANYMORE:s) OMG IM SO GLAD SHE FINALLY KNOWS BUT THINGS R GUNNA GET HYPED AND CRAZY CANT WAIT PL CONTINUE WEN POSSIBLE!!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I first found your fic of afnet and have been waiting for the next chap but than I found that you had updated more here so yay. I'm loving it so far. Definatly flows nicely and you have good timing you don't jump through scenes just to shorten your writing time so awesome. Please update soon I will be checking back very often so please hurry!
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Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 20:21 CST
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Good job...im new on and started 2 read your story and it is good...please continue
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job yet again! I was wondering when his true identity would be revealed, too bad it had to happen during a life death situation, but I loved it! You have to continue! I can't handle suspense for long periods of time! kneels to the ground again, begging, pleading, looking as pitiful as can be
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!! cant wait till the next one so update soon okay
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Heart's Landfill is one of my favorites, too! Anyway, great chapter! It's finally out in the open, although a bloody attack probably wasn't they way he was planning on telling her ^-^ Poor Kagome will probably be torn between cooing over his injuries and giving him a hardcore silent treatment. Can't wait for the next two weeks! I'm secretly hoping big, tough InuYasha will sing Backstreet Boys for Kagome, hahaha! Who says you can't enjoy Korn AND boy bands?
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tell her!!! ugh! i can't take this anymore! I love this fanfic so much! update as soon as you can (but still as well written as your previous chapters have been.) ^_^
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Title: AHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! The suspense is killing me! I just read the last chapter and now I want to know what happens and if it's dramatic as hell! I love drama (even though i am a drama queen queen and i can't ac to save my life...) I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! You must finish!!! ~ kneels to the ground and and begs with pleading eyes, looking pitiful
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Title: Gve us some Janis!
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I can barely wait another two weeks!!! Okay, I'm not aure about the love duet, but if you had Kagome singing at one point after InuYasha tells her the truth 'Take Another Little Piece of My Heart' by Janis Joplin is a good lamenting song. It's not too sappy, it's an amazing song, and totally irrisistable not to sing along to when you're in the shower. It's a little old, but totally California Haight-Ashbury hippie style, and has to be sung by a professional. And it's a little rough, so if she'd been crying right before, but then pulled herself together, her voice would be scratchy enough to pull it off. just a suggestion, of corse. I love Janis Joplin, and I have yet to see any songfics with any of her songs. I just think it would be awsome if Kagome sang it. I'll still read if you don't like Janis though, like I said, this story is too cool to stop now. Very original, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 12:11 CDT
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i am absolutely loving this! please update soon! and i was thinking that maybe for when inuyasha confesses, you could use the song "Iris" by Goo Goo Dolls. I think it would fit perfectly. but then again, im not the author, am i? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 14:50 CDT
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this is good but it's going to come to tears soon when Kags finds out update soon
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 20:00 CDT
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I absolutly love it! The way the story flows is just fantastic! The fact that you have a great writing style and few (if any) typing mistakes is just an added bonus...please update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE AND POLAR BEARS!...Cheers
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story! im glad inuyasha finally admitted his love for kagome, but what would he do if she rejected him if she found out who he really was? please update soon; im dying here!
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