| "A Grudging Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a romantic chapter and every thing comes out! I love it x10! I can't wait to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be looking forward to your update! I can't say it enough: definitely worth the wait! I LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 15:53 CST
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yay! I LOVE FLUFF!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And there it is, the big lemon! Very nice job, I must say. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm sure Kagome has some more issues to workut with InuYasha. Do you think you'll be writing another fic after this, or is it one of those one-time things? I hope it's the former.
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Title: YAYYY!!!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!! I can't believe it! This is what i waited for! I still continue to grovel at your feet, thanking you for this wonderful story! Figuratively speaking of course I can't wait for the next chapter, especially with the lemon! You rock man! Keep this up until the end, I will continue to read your stories but i will ever love this one I know I'm sounding sappy and stupid and I'm an adult, but when it comes to a good Inu/Kag story such as this, I can't help myself!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap, I should have put the little dance I did after this chapter on youtube. Seriously, just thinking about two sports opponents who're suppose to be fighting eachother basically drop their weapons and start making out makes it hard to breathe for me. I absoluetely loved it! Also, thanks for replying to review, I got you email just this morning, and I was looking forward to reading this all day! Can't wait for the next chapter, big lemon!
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Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...this chapter was Kaiwii
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 14:36 CST
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yay! I would have been gripping the edge of my chair if it had handles update soon
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Title: AIEE!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...that was intense! I was quivering the whole time! What exactly is going to happen between them now? AIEEEE! Continue and i will be ever grateful yes I'm sounding like a dork but hey it's a good story! Can u blame me?
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 10:12 CST
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that last chapter made me cry (for some reason heh heh) please update I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 00:15 CST
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wow, I love this chapter, it was so angst, especially the last part, I just want to know what' happens in the game, good job, keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, man you had me on the edge of my seat on this one!!! When Sango was telling her to shoot him, I was all 'no, no! don't be like Kikyou!' I was actualy pretty happy when she walked away. And the date-rape accusation was totally unexpected, and I thought that would have bothered him more while he was drowning his sorrows in alchohol than it did. Excellent chapter, and I am just beyond pleased that you posted early. ALSO! thanks for recommending Blue Guitar. I normally stick with mm.org, but that story has quickly moved to the top of my must-see list, right along with this story and a couple others. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next post!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 20:42 CST
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omg this was a darkie, but a goodie. thnkx and please update soon! I'm not sure i can wait that long! :b
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Reviewed By: Yurara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 22:22 CST
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OMG THAT WAS OMG(BTW IM DIAMOND369 ON FANFICTION I WAS JUST CHECKING OUT THE STORIES ON HERE FOR SOME ODD REASON THEY WONT SEND ME UPDATES ANYMORE:s) OMG IM SO GLAD SHE FINALLY KNOWS BUT THINGS R GUNNA GET HYPED AND CRAZY CANT WAIT PL CONTINUE WEN POSSIBLE!!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I first found your fic of afnet and have been waiting for the next chap but than I found that you had updated more here so yay. I'm loving it so far. Definatly flows nicely and you have good timing you don't jump through scenes just to shorten your writing time so awesome. Please update soon I will be checking back very often so please hurry!
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Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 20:21 CST
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Good job...im new on and started 2 read your story and it is good...please continue
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