| "I See Your True Colours: Eye of the Beholder" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2009 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why arent you updating? the story is awesome!!!!
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply cannot wait until your next update. This has captured my interest. You have made it so well played out. Your writing skills are amazing! I've favoured this piece for sure, and i am now anxiously waiting for the next installment. I want to see how you will portray inuyasha and kagome. So until then, i will go and see what other works you have posted up!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 13:20 CDT
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one is assuming that there will be some unusual 'physical' characteristic directly resulting from her ignorance of pre-natal abstinence and maybe if not actual mental retardation an attitude/emotional problem related to her alcohol consumption during her pregnancy? ♣ one wonders why sesshoumaru's mother didn't prepare him and help him accept izayoi's new role in his life, surely she would have at least done that in view of how he would be affected. ♥ one believes that in canon, although not necessarily amicable, sess-mother was accepting of inu no taisho's extramarital arrangement since polygomy and concubines were quite normal in sengoku jidai. in manga, when she helps sesshoumaru perfect tensaiga's meidou i think she also knew that the attack was going to be transferred to yasha's tessaiga. it was just one of those necessary lessons in compassion, humility and self reliance for sesshoumaru. ♦ interesting, intriguing and i will be eagerly anticipating more. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 01:48 CDT
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Hmm...interesting again I say. I hope baby Inu will be ok. I don't like when expecting mother drink or do drugs cause I have heard all the ill effects that happens to the babies. It always so sad. But keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: C Moon On: September 13, 2008 23:20 CDT
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Hey, I'm so happy that you're starting a new story. Your stories are always great, and I highly doubt that this one will be any different.... However, I'd also really like you to finish the last part of "Return of the Youkai". ....Ya I'm a bit of a perv..*nervous laughter*.... Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapter of this story. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Poor Inu-baby he has fetal alcohol syndrome. I also like how you made Inu's mother self-center and his father ( in my opinion) is either blind or ....I don't know what to say about him. I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: September 13, 2008 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have come a long way, young lady. You always were very good and now you are even better. Very well written. I'm guessing that Inuyasha is going to have 'fetal alcohol syndrom'. I look forward to watching this story unfold. Later.
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 23:10 CDT
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hmm...interesting. I can't wait for the story to start!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very vague looking opening... I cant wait to see where you go with it...
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