| "The Tales of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: jojoba On: May 26, 2012 06:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this should be a Yuuram!!My friend (birdd) and I were discussing this fic and both of us thought of the same thing. We thought that it would be unfair to Wolfram if Yuuri ended with Gunter because what Gunter has for Yuuri is adoration and infatuation.While what Wolfram feels for Yuuri is true love! Another thing as both of them were raped they would never work out.The two will see each other as a reminder of the past and in reality it won't work.If Yuuri is with Wolfram he might end up forgetting about it! Another thing is that both Gunter and Yuuri desrve love but not from each other but with someone who can make them forget!! Plus Yuuri and Wolfram would look so cute together. |
Reviewed By: birdd On: May 26, 2012 06:12 EDT
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I really think this would be a great fic if it was YuuRam cause now YuuGun would be expected and YUURAM is just meant to be!! |
Reviewed By: well who needs me On: May 26, 2012 06:03 EDT
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HEY!!! This is such a great fic!!! I really think this should be YuuRam and Gunter should be out of the equation!! |
Reviewed By: yuuram On: May 26, 2012 05:59 EDT
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this should really be a Yuuram!!! |
Reviewed By: dadadada On: May 26, 2012 05:58 EDT
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this is a real nice fic!!I think you should make it Yuuram. |
Reviewed By: gunter yuu love On: January 02, 2010 14:49 EST
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damnit woman update!!1 and the one below has a good idea. a inu/kkm fic would be very interesting :3 Update!!!!!!! *pushes pen to move faster* XD
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Title: another
Reviewed By: zzzLaceyzzz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 22:13 EDT
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i was wondering if you could make an iy/kagome fic with a yuuri/kagome/wolfram pairing? that would be soooooo awesome!!!!
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Reviewed By: YuriFan1011FG On: May 21, 2009 23:51 EDT
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Wow it sure is hot and heavy in the action. I must say that I really liked how you delevoped the characters. After reading the first part of the story I was really hoping. I though that Wolfram is really acting out of control and would not be a good match for Yuri. I really hope poor Gunter gets his guy. I cannot imange them with Wolfram or anyone else. I really liked if Yuri ends up with Gunter by the end.
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Title: Comment and Revies
Reviewed By: Unknown Fan On: May 18, 2009 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your writing style and how you give such depth to the characters. Even Yuuri who always struck me as kind of a naive, wimpy, kid charccter. However I feel so bad for him after the rape, and for me personally I think that Wolfram"s drama and temper tanturams are just to much for the young king to deal with at this point when he is having just a hard enough time getting through the day. I mean for god sakes he almost raped his so called love of his life. In addition if Gunter or Conrad ever found out what the hell he did to thier king then there be no way in hell Gunter would be in a three way relationship. Let alone let Wolfram even get into a realtionship. This why I think that to turn this story into a Wolfram/Yuuri?Gunter would be the worst ending and no true to the story you have written. I don't think Gunter cares or love anyone else than the young king. I think that Gunter would be the only one capable of curing Yuuri of the nightmares and stain left on his soul by the attack, becuase Gunter is caring, kind, loving and gentle with Yurri which at this time is exactly just what he needs. Plus if you have ever experinced something like rape, then you understand that it is hard for people to truely understand what you through and how that has changed you forever. Which is why Yuuri is so so luck to have someone he is falling in love with who has gone through what he has and is able to understand how that has changed him forever. I tell you now that this story would be ruined and wrecked if Yurii ended up with anyone other than Gunter. After both have been raped like that I think they both deserve some happiness. Please write or update theis story soon with another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Yuumouah On: October 02, 2008 15:41 EDT
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hey i think it's going nicely and i'm happy to see a Wolfram/Yuuri/Gunter fic ^^ goodluck with writting
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Reviewed By: me On: September 18, 2008 12:14 EDT
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ooo more chaps ^^ i like
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Reviewed By: Yuuri Fan 101 On: September 15, 2008 12:46 EDT
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I like this!!!! to bad for Yuuri thought -____- but the Gunter and Yuuri sceen was hott!!! I ca't wait for more ^_^
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