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| "Sesshoumaru My Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Glad your back.
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you and this story are back. I hope they don't try to stop Jiro from removing Sesshoumaru from the building. In fact, I don't think this Kenta person is going to give up on possessing Sesshoumaru so easily. He sounds like a modern day Naraku. Also, even if Jiro is suppose to be a good guy, I still don't like his deception over the visor. It seems Sesshoumaru has the innocent mind of a child right now and the visor was like a toy to him. You don't give a child a toy that brings them pain. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will trust him after this whenever Jiro tries to give him something.
| Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 23:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
*grins* Hell yeah! I knew you wouldn't give up! *cheers* Now, all I have to recommend for your story is to make a little longer chapters (it helps make the story flow better, in my opinion). *smiles* I'm glad you're continuing this story, it has a great plot... I heven't seen a plot line like this... I've seen one that's somewhat similar, but in a VERY far away sense. So yeah, it's incredibly original! *laughs* Makenaide, Bloodcherry
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