"To Fill The Void" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 04:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lmao i loved this!! absolutely hilarious poor hiei xD this would be a good full length fic though please consider continuing it!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 13:21 CST Comment/Review: I think I have said this before but I think you would do great with a sequal I thnk I really do love the way you write. Merry Christmas BTW. ;-)
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 22:45 CST Comment/Review: i was hoping you would add another chapter to this. i still like that way kagome made her enterance, that is unique, especially since she try to make hiei feel better by patting the area she accidently kneed. update whenever you have a moment. i hope you expand a chapter or two.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 22:30 CST Comment/Review: i will have you know that i am still laughing. ♠ in manga: http://www.onemanga.com/Inuyasha/553/01/ yasha went after her... one would expect it to rain hanyou any second now.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 11:37 CDT Comment/Review: lol...LOL ♣ oh, that was funny. so she got sucked up in miroku's kazzana and ended up in the makai? on hiei? at least she could go back and finish the mission(although it's finished for real in manga) so he's been sending the nasties to makai, hakadoshi's there too. so what happened to the shards? ♠ she has to go back to reassure miroku he didn't kill her... yeah, yeah it is just a one shot but those questions just popped up. ♦ great story, really funny ♥ a pleasure ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 00:19 CDT Comment/Review: i like it. short and sweet. kagome always did fall for the adorable. or in this case fall on. i think this could be made into a story if you wanted to. or make it two/three shot. either way i think it was good.
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