Reviewed By:Tergar of konoha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 16:48 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Huh... well that was interesting. Okay let me explain muy ratings: (style of writing): The short choppy paragraphs are mildly annoying. They just bug me for some reason. (Spelling/Grammar): Good enough for me. Not the important part. (Originality): Red/Lance is common. Red/Lance screwing eachothers brains out is common. Red/Lance being weird fetish-y Pokemon is certainly not. (Enjoyment): It was over fast, but otherwise very well done. (overall rating): Not much more I can expect from a writer. It was a good read, it's just there are better one out there.
