"Don't Need Me, Anymore?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: shikon no kouken On: August 22, 2009 07:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is pretty good so far. And actualy, Shiori's new husbands name is Kazuya Hatanaka. And Kurama's new step brother is named Shuichi as well, Strangely enough. Just thought I would let you know.
| Reviewed By: MayahV On: July 15, 2009 23:27 CDT Comment/Review: It's very, very interesting so far. I really hope that you continue writing it, I'd love to see where everything ends up. Nice job so far~ please keep writing ^^
| Reviewed By: Hecates_slave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 02:28 CST Comment/Review: OMG! Write more! Serious. What's he lying about? Seriously. Seriously Seriously. *I'm changing my inflection everytime I say 'seriously'*
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