Reviewed By:inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 09:06 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I really enjoy your story. It's great thus far. I love Piccolo's attitude and Nova's personality. I really enjoy the conflicted personality of Piccolo. I wonder what Nova is thinking or better yet what has gotten her so spooky. I wonder what reactions the rest of the gang would have with what Piccolo is doing with Nova. Your style of writing is very good, however, I'd love to see some more description.
