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| "A Blast From The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 12:00 CDT
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Chocobos! Chocobos rock! I understand the Final Fantasy obsession, I have FFX for my PS2 and my sister and I are both nuts about it ^__^ . I suppose I can forgive you for chapter belated-ness, seeing as I can sympathize with Bardock's obsession... | Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 11:13 CDT
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Yagouarundi! Too cute! They have the real cats at the zoo downtown, so I immediately recognized the species pun. Nifty!
And now I'm gonna bust out with a mini-lesson on the French language--"qui" means "who" (which may have been a typo on your part, I dunno). If you wanted to sound grammatically correct, you might wanna say "What do you want" as "Qu'est-ce que vous voulez" (pronounced kess-kuh voo voo-lay). Anyway, I'm done now, and you can confuse people. Ciao for now! | Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 13:12 CDT
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Dun worry bout the length, hun! It's just fine, and the story's making progress, so all you need to worry about is what's gonna happen next. Ciao for now! | Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 17:42 CDT
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LOL! Gohan just can't catch a break, can he? I wasn't expecting this part to be out until at least tomorrow, but then I've underestimated the effects of boredom on other people's muses. Oh well! The visual of Max yelling "Damn it!" when he did was too funny, and it looks to me like the Saiyan blood is gonna have the chance to spread a little farther than originally planned, as well. See ya when I see ya! | Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 15:19 CDT
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It's me, Samantha, and that was most definitely soon enough! I just looked, and it was like in our titration lab in chemistry--there's just the little bit of your story up last time I checked, and then I look again and BAM! There's so much more! And poor Gohan and Piccolo, having to hear all that stuff they just didn't need to know back in Chapter 3. Wonderful! And are you gonna keep Max around and have him join the good guys like practically everybody in the group did? Cuz that would be nifty! Anyhoo, gotta run now, can't wait to see more! | Reviewed By: samantha On: July 12, 2002 12:54 CDT
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Unlike [i]some[/i] people, I appreciate cliffhangers as long as they're dealt with in the reasonably near future. Take the three parts of Lord of the Rings, for example. Cliffhangers executed so well that I worship Tolkien for his evilness. So I'll be back, which means I wanna see this very minor cliffhanger taken care of. | Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHA!
I can't stop laughing! This is absolutely fabulous! I have yet to hypothesize as to how Bardock ended up on Earth at that time.. Just too funny ;) Goku is such a ditz ^_^
Love it, can't wait for the next chapter! :P I'm sure you hear that all the time, though..
~erie. | Reviewed By: Nikkie On: July 12, 2002 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what he's going to think when he meets Gohan, his grown-up grandson... :D Loving this! Please get the next chapter up soon! | Reviewed By: Burenda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 06:05 CDT
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Hey! Glad to see you here, too. ^_^ I've been missing out on reading my favorite fics 'cause they're all on ff.net. *sniffle*
I love this story. Time travel, chibis, and Bardock! *giggles*
One thing, though. Apparently, you used a "special character" or symbol in writing this fic, 'cause "…" gets sprinkled around periodically. Makes things a little confusing. You might want to go back and edit that symbol out.
Other than that, great story! |
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