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| "Love is a Battlefield" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: (Someone) On: October 18, 2008 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story so far, but I do have one question. Is the preface a look into the future or past? Other than that, the story is excellent.
| Reviewed By: Polka dot On: October 11, 2008 16:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well sesshomaru certainly is a basket case in this one, but I'm sure that he'll have a cute puppy
| Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First you're welcome, but really I sould thank you for such a nice story even though Sesshomaru is hurting really bad right now, it's rare for a MPreg to be Sesshomaru carrying and not Inuyasha. It's always Inuyasha with pup, but if you ask me I think having Sesshomaru the one to bare the pup is more enjoyable. Now with the review which will be short because all I have to say is one: Inuyasha you better find him and fix your mistake, and fast. two: Sesshomaru not everyone hates you, you just have to remember that Cratus loves you as a father should love their son.*smiles* And three: Inuyasha get your mind off of sex until you straighten things out with the man you love!!!!*gives pointed look*
| Title: My poor Sesshy!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor baby, mood swings and the thought that Inuyasha hates him. Sesshomaru is really lucky to have Cratus, the only demon he can love and trust and know that his love is returned. Sesshomaru being with pup just makes him even more Kawaii. *smiles*
| Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha you big dummy, you jerk, you baka, get you feet god damn moving and go after Sesshomaru. You say you don't hate him, you say you love him then prove it. Don't let Sesshomaru keep thinking that you want nothing to do with him or the pup. Find him, grab him tell him that you're sorry for running like an ass. Tell him that you love him and want to be with him as his mate forever. Tell him this before Naraku gets ahold of him, and rapes him just so that Sesshomaru can carry him pups. God, Sesshomaru has a nack for making me want to cry. He's in so much pain and I just want to take him in my arms and never let him go.
| Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Cratus, I really like how he and Sesshomaru interact with each other. That's how a father/son relationship is supposed to be. I am glad and somewhat sad that Sesshomaru is carrying Inuyasha's pup. Glad because Sesshomaru is happy, and sad because we don't know how Inuyasha is going to take the news of hearing his got a pup on the way. Inuyasha is confusing me, he runs away after he mates Sesshomaru 'cause he wanted to be with Kagome, but know that they are together again he is keeping far away from her. All because the mear tough of her makes his skin crawl. Jeez, Inuyasha if you miss Sesshomaru that much you should never had run away from him, and now you're saying that if he really wanted to be with you he should have came and found you. That's BULLSHIT and you know it, Inuyasha.
| Title: Screams!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INUYASHA I SO HATE YOU RIGHT NOW. How could you, how could you USE your brother like some fucking whore, plus you mark him as your mate. He loves you, Sesshomaru loves you and you just use him for LUST. You're such a jerk Inuyasha, you say you don't love Kagome like the way she 'loves' you that it's a friend thing our a sister thing. And yet as soon as you mark Sesshomaru as a mate all of a sudden you wanted Kagome as your lover.*glares daggers at Inuyasha* Cratus, please stay close to Sesshomaru he's going to need you even if he doesn't say it. Shit, you had me crying for Sesshomaru's broken heart, but I still love you.*smiles*
| Title: HI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me laughing when Sesshomaru asked if they could bathe now, killing any repeat proformance of the night before. Then you had me wanting to cry when Sesshomaru was in so much pain at lossing his arm once more. Man, that sucked I was hoping that he would have been able to keep it, oh well wishful thinking on my part.*pouts* And Naraku better keep it in his pants, 'cause Sesshomaru is Inuyasha's and no one elses.
| Title: NICE!!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very SMEXY Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are together. So Sesshomaru can have pups huh, does that mean that sometime soon Inuyasha will become a father. It would be nice, for them both to have to connection. I just hope that Kagome stays away from them, 'cause I really don't want to think of what she'll do if she found out. Hell I REALLY don't want to think about what happens when Naraku finds out, because you know as well as I that he will. I hope that some part even though asleep heard Sesshomaru say I love you, it would be nice if Inuyasha heard it. Thanks for the update, I no worries once you have me interested I stay loyal to the very end.*smiles*
| Title: Jumps up and down!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get finished reviewing one update then another pops up so I review that, I go and re-read chapter 4 get to the end and WHAT do I see another update. I know it's not my birthday and it's 2 months from Xmas, so why are you spoiling me!!!!*smiles* Not that I'm complaining mind you, keep them coming. So Naraku wanted Sesshomaru to be 5 and not 11 or 12 that he turned out to be? I didn't like this comment from Naraku,"though I must stay, youth becomes you, Sesshoumaru" then that creepy smile makes me think he is going to do something more than just take Sesshomaru into his body. Something like rape first, then join he to himself. And, oh you had me so happy when Sesshomaru took that BITCH Kagome by the throat. He was the first one to see if Inuyasha was okay after her many 'sits' and the first one to try and give the witch what SHE deserves . She needs to go back to her time because she's not needed, they can find some other way to find the shards. She also needs to get it in her head tat Inuyasha will NEVER lover her. Thank you for the update, can't wait for chap. 6!!!!*smiles*
| Title: I LOVE YOU*smiles*
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just going to re-read the last chap. that was updated and was happy to see that there was another one. *grins* So Sesshmoaru seems to be drawing danger, well I can't blame him it's those bastards that think that since he is a kid they can take him out. Dumb bastards, never thought that his brother will be there to save him. Poor Shippo he was so sad when he thought that he drove Sessh away, just made me want to hug him. Man, I really wanted to kill Kagura she hurt my Sesshomaru and now we have to deal with Naraku that jerk. But, before Naraku came I was nodding to everything Sesshomaru was saying to Inuyasha. Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next chapter. We must fight off Naraku, he cannot take Sesshomaru away from Inuyasha!!!!!
| Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Notice how I did not rate spell or gram it's because I really don't care, because I know what you mean to say and that's all that matters. And don't feel bad about it 'cause I'll tell you something I suck at spelling too. *smiles* But hey it's not like we don't try, right? Now on with the update, I was so happy to see that this was updated. Sesshomaru is so KAWAII *smiles* I can so see him just as you described him always having to be clean, not wanting to be woken up earlier than need be. He's just like me but I want to be up at noon, not mid morning. I wonder what happened between Sesshomaru and their dad? Are you going to go into detail in one of your chaps. or will it remain a mystery???? Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Please!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave a 9 for the first 'cause I have a question the fist chapter:Preface-is that a look into the past or the future???? Did he die once only for Naraku to bring him back with no memories and as a child. Or is he going to die later on in this story once everything was put back together between Sesshmoaru and Inuyasha. (I for one hope it's the first, 'cause I DON'T want Sesshomaru to die!!!!!)And what the HELL Kagome, you can't keep your fucking mouth shut. You just had to tell Sesshomaru that the man he thinks is alive is not but, but you didn't stop there you also had the nerve to say that it is also his fault. Man I wanted to kill you then. I really like this, I will like it even more if you update and keep Sesshomaru ALIVE!!!!!*gives puppy dog eyes*
| Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooooo goood cant wait for next chap.
| Reviewed By: wolfluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE YOU AND YOUR MUSE COME UP WITH NEXT FOR OUR FAV PAIR!!!!
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